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  • 5. Missing Persons (from the draft novel Stawell Bardo)

    5. Missing Persons (from the draft novel Stawell Bardo)

    Missing Persons

    “Here, have a go at this:

    A strange discovery was made yesterday by a miner named Wilson. While cutting props in the bush, about two miles from the Deep Lead, he found that he was at work beside the headless trunk of a human being. The remains were lying about ten feet from an abandoned shaft. The head was severed from the body, and although a careful search was made, it was nowhere to be found. The body had apparently been removed to its present spot within the last week, for there is a mark on the ground close to where the remains were. The body appeared to be that of a male, tall and slender. Not a vestige of clothing of any description was found on or near the remains.

    “Well, that is out of the ordinary, ain’t it, Wilson, what it says in this rag here?” Cleggett, the barroom wag, lowered the newspaper and gave Wilson a sidelong look over his glass.

    “Indeed, well it was exceeding strange,” Wilson said. “Eerie, horrible, and awful as well, I can assure ye. Not every day a cove turns around and cops an eyeful of sompthing like that, I mean to say, a naked corpse right there next to you where you’re workin’. Inches away. Cop that, mate! A nude, naked body of some bloke without no head and all – without a particle of clothing. Ants all over it. Crawling down his throat and everything. No private parts neither and all.”

    “Where was is clothes?” Nash muttered from along the bar.

    “No one knows for godsakes, shit! But you know, there wasn’t no stink of decomposing, having been there a while, and the skin was a kind of mystic golden colour, swear to Christ, like the Pharaoh, I reckon, like some mummy. Cor’blimey, fill this up for us, Ronald, wont’ya? I’m still a’shiverin’ and a’shakin’ from the shock. Shout me one? What about it? Calm me nerves. Who’s won the bloody cricket in Melbourne, anyhoo?”

    Cleggett set his glass down and snorted wearily.

    “No, I mean, strange you was working, like the paper says here. I ain’t never seen you doing no work never. Never heard of it neither. Yet here it is in black and white in the bloody paper. You working! How do they get them facts the sorts of which no-one’s never seen nor heard of before? Cutting props, you? God Almighty, what a farce. Love to witness that. That is an original story!”

    He paused for effect. “Oh, I see! No, the point of the story is, some bloke’s got himself murdered and ’ad his head cut ’orf and you found him.”

    A couple of grunts along the line.

    “Well anyway, who is he? Or if you like, who was he?”

    “They dunno who he was,” Wilson explained. “That’s the problem, like. How can they catch who done him in, if they don’t even know who he was, like? That’s just what I’m trying to tell the bloomin’ coppers. Detective didn’t even want to listen to me. Just kept telling me to shut up every time I opened me mouth. I was invited to the whatsit, of course – as what they call the discoverer of the cadaver. Bloody dead body layin’ there large as life. Shit. And I lost the day’s work of cuttin’ props and all.” He took a gulp of whiskey.

    “Oh yes, you and your props. Hi, get that dog out of ’ere!”

    “Oi, get that bloody dog out!”

    “Ah, he’s not doin’ no harm.”

    “Yeah, leave the poor bastard be.”

    “Ah, e’s bringin’ in the flies!”

    “No he ain’t. Look, he’s drawin’ ours over there into his corner! Look at that one, there you go.”

    “So he is, leave him then.”

    “Yeah, leave him be, he ain’t doin’ no harm nohow.”

    “Leave him be, you bastard!”

    The greying old red and tan kelpie settled in.

    “That is a problem, about the identity. But I overheard the coppers say some bloke was missing.”

    “Yeah, who?”

    “Bellman, I think I heard. Poor bastard. Wife and child, I think I heard. Maybe not, I dunno. She left him, I think maybe I heard.”

    “Good name,” Cleggett reflected.

    “Yeah, I know.”

    Never send to know for whom the bell tolls …” Cleggett drawled.

    “Yeah, I know.”

    It tolls for thee.”

    “Oh, for Chrissakes. Blimey, you don’t half bang on. Gad, what are they putting in this stuff?

    The mystery astonished and horrified the community, locally and across the country. At last the police had something to work upon in ferreting out what had seemed a hopeless mystery. Steadfastly, Detective Forster – dour, methodical, undistracted – set himself to the task of unravelling the details and run the murderer to ground.

    One Frank A. Bellman, a labourer, hadn’t been accounted for during the past month and seemed a likely candidate for the victim. The time frame was right, and his brother was concerned enough to notify the constabulary. Bellman was supposed to visit him at Warrnambool – but failed to show up.

    Forster was at his desk, some new leads having come in. He perused the recent details on Bellman, a page and a half. Hopefully, this was the man. Seemed a decent enough fellow, drank a bit, perhaps too much, but what was that? Didn’t gamble, hardly.

    Why was the head cut off? Obviously, to hide the identity of the deceased; so it was likely the perpetrator either had some connection to him or had been seen with him recently.

    Forster harked back to the inquiry at the pub at Deep Lead, and how the Celestial seemed to look not at the corpse, but somehow through it. That Mow Fung, weird character, Chinese or no. Forster could not get him out of his head. Perhaps call in on him in a couple of days, might know something he’s not saying.

    Frank A. Bellman.

    Frank a bellman?

    Rubbish.

    He was at his wits’ end, mind going around in circles, at the end of a track that petered out and turned into sand, just like his visit to the Junction Hotel and the crime scene. The crime scene a murderer’s paradise, if one had such an inclination. Footprints in the sand were erased in no time. Bottomless mining holes everywhere for miles around, one right near the body. Take the head and clothes, and you are away Scot free.

    Bellman was a good chance, so Forster mounted up and set off to do the rounds of Bellman’s known haunts. He rode out to Bellman’s shanty, where he found a dead dog, and a half-mad horse, and spent a while getting water into it and shifting it into the shade.

    “I’ll send someone in a little bit, you blokes, you keep tight, won’t be long.”

    He rode out through the front barbed-wire gate and dismounted to hook it up again. Clear as day, the Junction publican came to mind again. That inscrutable look still gave you the shivers somehow. He mounted, wheeled about, feeling an impulse to return to the shack.

    A shed fifty yards off stood steaming in the midday sun, so he went over. Behind the shed, a foal lay panting. He coaxed it into the shade, then went to fetch some water from Bellman’s muddy dam. When he poured it gently over the foal’s neck, the animal blinked, snorted, and took a drink. It would live.

    He paused at the gate, took a long breath, and rode to the barracks.

    Mounted-Constable Hadfield was there, chatting with a civilian. They stopped and looked up when Forster came in.

    “This is Mister Bell,” Hadfield said.

    “Bellman?”

    “Just Bell, Detective Sergeant. He’s a woodcarter, lives here in Stawell.”

    A bleached, weathered scrap of clothing lay on the desk: the torn-off half-portion of a waistcoat, violently ripped from the rest, buttons missing and lining torn askew.

    “What’s this?”

    “Mister Bell found these items in the bush, sir, a bit of a way from Deep Lead towards here, and he brought them in for us.”

    Forster checked himself – he’d been too brusque. “That’s very kind of you, sir. Do you mind telling me what took you out that way?”

    “Following my occupation. Gathering and carting wood. Sometimes I carts it, sometimes gathers, most often usually both.”

    “Might you be available to show us the spot, post haste?”

    Bell had found the waistcoat on his way to a place called the Four Posts, about eighty yards from the Old Glenorchy Road. The three fossicked through the immediate area, moving as systematically as they could outward from the spot, which Bell had thoughtfully marked with a cross of four rocks. After about an hour, Forster dispatched Bell to fetch Constable Hillard for another set of legs and eyes.

    Alone now, taking a mental break, he wandered down to a dry creek bed, fringed with scrub and tall kangaroo grass.

    A  lone bird call rang out – Four gallons of water! – and he stopped, turning towards the sound. To his left, where the call had come from, something caught his eye: a small heap half-hidden in the grass. He’d almost missed it, for the cloth had taken on a yellowish-green tinge from long exposure, nearly the same as the tussocks around it. He might have passed and re-passed forever without discovering it, but for that bird. Feathered bloody oracle.

    Three buckets of water! Fainter, receding, gone. Magnifying the heavy, empty expanse. What turns up when you are not looking.

    The coat was blood-stained, especially about the neck. One button remained on the waistcoat, the only one to withstand the violent strain by which the garment had been yanked open. It matched one found under the body. On the shirt, too, were the gaps where two buttons, also recovered under the remains, had been torn free. There could be no doubt that the clothes were those worn by the murdered man. He drew from the tangle of cloth a third of a wideawake felt hat, the rest having been cut away. A few hairs clung to the remaining rim, the same colour as those found at the base of the dead man’s neck. They were stuck to the felt by blood. The trousers were missing, and so was the dead man’s head.

    “Wideawake,” he couldn’t help saying softly aloud, as he made his notes, “no nap.”

    He’d organise another sweep in a week or so, but for now there were other fires to tend.

    Bellman’s mother had been summoned over from Horsham to examine the remains, which she was sure as sure could be were her son’s:

    “It can’t be he, oh it can’t be he! But I fear it is. I’m certain it is! His hair’s turned a little more to the reddish hue, that’s all, workin’ out here like a navvy! What a bonnie bairn he was, the wee rascal! That mole on his shoulder is sure his. Oh, he was a fine laddie, with all of his future in front of him. But will you look at him, look at his skin. It’s … radiant, the peak of health! Bless the daft lad – he couldn’t scrub up like that when he was living. Ach, ma heid’s mince!”

    Hillard fetched her again from the Commercial Hotel in Stawell, where she was being put up, having imperfect relations with her other son. This time, it was not the body she was brought in to identify, but the items of clothing recovered from the bush.

     “He was a dear laddie,” she said quavering, placing her frail hand on the waistcoat. “Och, to think this was the last thing he wore, it sends me heart racin’. Well, whit’s fur ye’ll no go by ye!” Overcome, she paled and drew the back of her hand up to her brow. Forster pulled a chair over and lowered her into it.

    There came a knock at the door, and a constable poked his head in. “There’s a bloke out here to see you, Detective.”

    “Not now.”

    “It seems important.”

    “I said not now.” The door closed.

    Mrs Bellman began to sob. The door opened again; the same constable gestured to Hillard, who looked at Forster.

    “For goodness sake, go and see what he wants.”

    The woman sobbed convulsively. Forster laid a hand lightly on her shoulder. The door opened and Hadfield came in quietly followed by a man.

    “You alright, Ma?”

    “In the name o’ the wee man, this isnae real!” Mrs Bellman turned white as a sheet, rose shaking – “Ye’re meant to be deid!” – and abruptly dropped to the floor.

    Thus the Bellman mystery – if one can call it that – was solved. Instead of going to Warrnambool as planned, he had detoured over into New South Wales and returned the next Saturday. He’d left the animals with feed enough for a few days, thinking he’d be home on Sunday. But his horse threw a shoe past Moama and went lame, and the smith wouldn’t see him till Friday, he had to lay up at some wayside inn, only the publican’s daughter had the measles, and he ended up minding the place while the missus boiled onions. At any rate: no foul play, no mystery. Just an irritatingly loquacious fellow, who couldn’t be bothered sending a wire.

    The case of a carrier named Flannigan, though not dissimilar, was in some respects more of a nuisance. His circumstances made it likely that the remains found near Deep Lead might be his. Detective Forster left Stawell by the first train Monday morning to conduct some interviews. On Tuesday, he struck out for Woodend and went some distance into Bullarook Forest, before doubling back to Seymour. He set the telegraph wires to work, then back to Ballarat, chasing a clue. By wire, he learned that Flannigan was alive and well in Deniliquin.

    The circumstances surrounding the disappearance of all persons reported missing from the district had now been accounted for. The discovery of the clothing further assisted in establishing the identity of the murdered man and was expected to furnish evidence leading to the apprehension of the perpetrator. Another step had been taken in the matter, and it was to be hoped that justice, having misplaced its head, would soon find its footing.


    Michael Guest © 2025

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  • 2. Autopsy at the Junction Hotel (from the draft novel Stawell Bardo)

    2. Autopsy at the Junction Hotel (from the draft novel Stawell Bardo)

    Autopsy at the Junction Hotel

    Sound of hooves and iron‑shod wheels on gravel reached the Junction Hotel door, a rare interruption in the sleepy settlement. Huish‑Huish brushed back her hair before going to answer the knock. A detective stood at the doorstep, one finger tapping lightly against his thigh. He was waiting for Mow Fung to answer, a name he knew from the licensing roll. He had driven from his headquarters at Stawell, only a few miles away.

    “Mrs Mow Fung, I presume? I am Detective Forster.” He made a slight, polite bow. A nervous man, a lean man, she observed, and the lean, nervous man removed his grey felt hat and fingered the brim. If he meant to unsettle her, he’d have to try harder. She caught the tang of carbolic soap clinging to him in the close air of the doorway. It suited him somehow. She ushered him into the bar. Theirs was a modest establishment, but scrubbed spotless. The faint smell of lamp oil and aged wood lingered in the cool interior, a scent that seemed to settle into its polished tables and floorboards. She had been topping up the lamps, and a tin container of oil remained open on one of the tables, next to a neat pile of linen squares.

    They passed the bottom of a staircase, halting at a child’s footsteps that came thumping down.

    “Mama! Alice won’t eat her porridge. I’ve told her and told her but she just picks at the egg and won’t touch anything else.”

    The mother suppressed a sigh. Such was the morning ritual. “Tell her the police have arrived. Once they deal with your father, I will have them deal with her too, if she is not careful.”

    Detective Forster could not prevent a cough, but immediately resumed his grim composure.

    The girl, aged twelve or so at most, ascended a few stairs, halted, unafraid but inquisitive.

    “What will they do with her, Mama?”

    “Use your imagination!” Huish-Huish was outdone – the child was incorrigible. “Now make them eat their breakfast properly and off to school with you! Foolish girl.”

    The daughter climbed the stairs with purpose, the hem of her uniform brushing the narrow boards.

    The mother stopped at a door halfway along a dim, unadorned hallway. The air smelled faintly of cold ash and last night’s cooking fires. From behind emanated the ghost of a voice. No distinct words, but what the newspapers mocked as “Oriental mishmash.”

    Turning to Forster, she said, “My husband is inside here with the gentleman.”

    “The others have already arrived?”

    “Only the dead one so far,” she said with a smile. “Mow Fung is a very silly man, who nurtures some foolish superstitions from old China. You must forgive him.”

    But she did not go barging in. There may be others. She laughed softly. “He daydreams, fantasises he communes with the dead. You know, he sinks down into the Ten Courts of Hell and has a bit of a chat. Haha!” She said it in a melodramatic tone with a gently mocking lilt.

    The faint chant in the room faltered, as if aware of their intrusion, then died altogether. She pushed the door open. The candle was out. The trace of a strange perfume lingered in the air. His odds and ends were tucked neatly out of sight. Forster felt the change in atmosphere as they stepped in – the pall was unsettling after the murmur that hung in the hallway.

    Mow Fung drew back a curtain, and the morning sun slanted through a haze of fine dust. He smiled at Forster and bobbed his head in a dumb-show of humility. There was something indefinably unusual about the fellow, Forster thought.

    A noise of wheels and hooves announced more visitors, and Huish-Huish left the room to meet them. Forster jotted a few notes in his pad as he examined the corpse.

    “This is exactly the same state it was in when it arrived yesterday?”

    “Of course, detective,” Mow Fung said.

    “You haven’t touched it?”

    “Touched it?” Mow Fung repeated. “Good idea. A very good idea! You are an excellent detective, I see that already. Splendid.” He pressed his palms together in a position akin to prayer and nodded. Forster found himself almost infected with the broad smile.

    “Very nasty business,” said the oriental. “Murderer came up from behind, a trusted companion, a good mate. Never knew what hit him!”

    Was that a laugh? A cackle? What was wrong with these people?

    Forster stepped to the table and took hold of the neck of the cadaver, stretching the flesh about the open wound. A sharp instrument had been used: an axe, probably, or maybe a tomahawk. The weapon evidently slipped in its course at first, creating minor abrasions before cutting right in through the neck.

    He turned to the Chinese man.

    “Mrs Mow Fung tells me you have been … communicating with the deceased,” he said.

    Mow Fung smirked. “The missis,” he said, “is a silly woman who nurtures some foolish superstitions from old China.”

    Forster gave him a piercing look. “Be so kind as to tell me, then, how you could have arrived at your – your deduction otherwise?”

    At that moment, Doctor Bennett, the constable, and Henry Wilson  – the miner who found the body – came into the room. Bennett cut Forster’s introductions short to begin the post‑mortem, and the constable took out his notebook. Forster and Mow Fung took chairs, while Wilson remained standing nearby, arms folded, watching in silence.

    “A European. Body very dried up. Bad state of decomposition,” Bennett dictated. “Much of the skin has been eaten away – particularly from the arms and legs – torn off in patches, very much dried up and leathery. A good portion of the integuments is gone.”

    “A lot of wild cats out there at them old Four Post diggin’s,” Wilson volunteered, but Forster silenced him with a look. “We’ll go through all that later on,” he said.

    “Too far gone to examine the internal organs,” Bennett continued. “The head is off – missing. It wasn’t found at the location, I take it?”

    The constable shook his head. “No, sir.” Of course not: some things the bush will not give back.

    “The upper margin of the skin on the neck has been divided by some sharp heavy instrument. About an inch below the margin of the neck is a transverse cut through the skin, which extends down to the vertebrae, evidently made by the same implement, probably a hatchet or axe. No other marks of violence. The upper margin of the neck is indented as if by a succession of cuts. The head has evidently not been severed from the body by one single blow, but by several. One cut extends transversely across the neck. Numerous abrasions in the vicinity. The vertebrae have been severed with that heavy blade. No, I should not think it was done with one blow.”

    “Not suicide then?” Wilson said deadpan.

    Forster gave him a withering look.

    The doctor continued. “I would estimate the height of the body to be that of a man about five foot ten or eleven inches. As for the length of time the body was exposed, I could not speak with certainty. But I would say any time from four weeks upwards – probably two months or so, to become dried up and mummified like this. Absolutely bloodless. From an examination of the bones and hair, I would conclude that the body was that of a middle-aged man probably between the ages of thirty-five and fifty-five years.

    “Internal organs – those of the chest and abdomen – are very much decomposed, and in the condition of… well, pulp. From the upper margin of the neck to the heel is five foot one and a quarter inches; from the tip of the shoulder to the ankle, four foot nine. The frame is large-boned and that of a big man. Some of the hair of the beard is on the neck – reddish-brown hair mixed with grey.  Skeleton is perfect. No broken bones.”

    He drew a surgical saw from his case and cut off a piece of vertebra and two fingers, then scraped some sandy‑red hair from the neck. He placed the specimens in a jar, which he plugged with its cork stopper.

    “Apparently after having consulted the victim in the afterworld, Mr Mow Fung here informs me that the deceased knew and trusted his murderer – enough to let him come up behind and take him by surprise,” Forster said.

    The constable chuckled.

    “Come on, leave off Sarge!”

    His superior paid him no mind, studying the body as he spoke.

    He turned to Wilson. “You discovered the body lying as it is now, Mr Wilson? On its back?”

    “Yes, sir. On its back when I found it, and your coppers brought it here the same way,” Wilson said.

    “Mm. Yet observe these abrasions on the chest, and the tiny stones impressed into the flesh – or where the flesh was exposed when he hit the ground. Even if the clothing was stripped away afterwards, the marks are clear enough: they suggest the body struck the earth face down.”

    Forster leaned over the table, his hand hovering a few inches above the corpse’s limbs, tracing out their outline. “And note the awkward sprawl of the arms and legs. The hands, palms upward as he fell, show no attempt to break his fall. Whoever removed the clothing may have shifted him somewhat, but that detail remains. He never knew what hit him. A pretty business indeed.”

    He straightened and glanced at Mow Fung. “Does my analysis accord somewhat with yours, Mr Mow Fung?”

    Mow Fung said nothing, gazing clearly into the detective’s eyes, a hint of a smile hovering on his lips.

    “I am a simple hotel-keeper. I am sorry – I do not follow your complicated talk.” Pensively, he stroked his sparse black beard (one day it may grow into a venerable white one). “Perhaps we do not see things as they are,” Mow Fung continued, “but as we are, as it was said in the old time.”

    “Quite so.”

    “Will I put that in, Sarge?”

    “Might be a good idea to insert it as a footnote for you to incorporate into your own meditations, which I’m sure you engage in regularly.”

    Mow Fung watched the buggies of the detective and the doctor, and the uniformed constable on horseback, recede at a leisurely pace down the dusty main street of Deep Lead – towards the old abandoned gold diggings on the Old Glenorchy Road. They rounded the bend, passed Bevan the ironmonger’s, and disappeared into the bush.

    He met Huish-Huish coming in from the laundry with an armful of towels, their youngest daughter Alice trailing on her skirts. At that moment, the other daughters trooped down the staircase, Lena – the eldest at twelve years – herding her siblings. School uniforms and wide-brimmed straw hats floated in a bubble of chatter, expressing such immediate and minute issues as are memorialized perhaps in the record of human souls, but seldom if ever recalled in human life. “Hurry now,” Huish‑Huish called. Alice was moaning about the porridge. Lena hesitated at the threshold as the others spilled outside, her hand lingering on the doorframe.

    Mow Fung could not refrain from a smile and faint shake of the head as they left with no fare-thee-well, though Lena struck him as older than her years. His eyes followed the children as they disappeared, then shifted to the bush beyond the paddocks. He remembered what Wilson had said: the body had been found at the Four Posts. He gazed at the bush a moment longer, the name settling uneasily in his mind.


    Michael Guest © 2025

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