Tag: Deep Lead

  • Hessian Sack

    Hessian Sack

    Some weeks passed. Detective Forster, in his modest office at the Stawell Police Barracks, untied the hessian sack and spread its contents across his desk before Mow Fung. The coat and waistcoat had both been slit cleanly down the back, likely to ease their removal from the body; a white twilled shirt with blue spots, an undershirt, and a fragment of a wideawake hat lay beside them, all stiffened and blackened with blood.

    “These were recovered near where the corpse was found,” he said. “I’m showing them around the district, starting with the publicans, to see whether anyone can put a name to them. Ever clap eyes on them?”

    “Not easy to say. Clothes are clothes,” Mow Fung said.

    “The spotted shirt? Pale hat?”

    Mow Fung drew an exaggerated grimace of doubt.

    “Not so unusual. Could belong to anyone. You are going down to the Chinese camp after this, I suppose?”

    As it happened, that was precisely Forster’s intention.

    “What makes you say that?”

    “Police always look there first. I hear talk – they say the murder was done in the camp, and the body carried east to where the head was taken off. That ground lies midway between the camp and Stawell – four miles. Convenient.”

    He gave a wry smile. “Naturally, it must be the Chinese camp. Many more men live in Stawell – but they are good white men.”

    “No call to get prickly, is there? There have been disturbances in the camp. It draws the rougher element, that much is certain. I can’t say I blame a man for drifting there. There’s precious little diversion in the bush.” Forster, Melburnian by origin, retained something of the city’s broader tolerance.

    “Who is to say the owner is the same?” Mow Fung said. “Blood on shirt and vest – but none on trousers. They were not discovered together, correct?”

    “I believe I am the one paid to ask questions,” Forster said mildly, “but there is no harm in your knowing that they were not found in the exact same place. I recovered the trousers roughly four hundred yards from the body and the other items.”

    “The blood on the coat is faint. There has been little rain of late. It may be animal blood, or human. We shall never know. Anything is possible. But if the murder were done in the Chinese camp, why take the body east toward Stawell to dispose of it, when there are many deep mines much closer to the west?”

    “A reasonable observation. Still, someone in the camp may have seen these garments before, when their unfortunate owner was still walking about in them. If you are heading home, I wonder whether you might accompany me to one or two establishments there – since you were good enough to lodge the deceased on behalf of the Victoria Police. That is, if your good lady would not object to your being away from business a little longer.”

    “Why do you want me to come?”

    “Only that you’ve got more English than many of the men down at the camp, and some of them are apt to clam up – or go to ground – when a policeman turns up. Despite what you say, there may be one or two uneasy consciences there.”

    “Perhaps some understand English better than you suppose, but prefer not to speak to policemen.” He glanced at Forster’s plain clothes. “It is wise not to wear the uniform – it softens the impression. My wife will manage the pub. I had intended to return as I came – on Shank’s mare, as they say.”

    • • •

    Forster drove them out of the township in a trap, along the track, through the dust and glare beneath the blazing sun. The landscape grew strange once the town fell behind them and its ordered shapes yielded to the scrub. Each, sooner or later, noticed the black mat of flies on the other’s back, where they pressed and jostled to feed on sweat and the salt of human skin, in their obscene communion. Best to leave them; disturb them and they rose in a thick, droning swarm.

    The dull thud of the horse’s hooves, the creak of the trap, and the rattle of the harness were swallowed by the silent bush, as though sound itself were absorbed into the vast, listening earth. Holes appeared in patches of bare orange soil already surrendering to growth – the signs of earlier incursions. Here and there, mounds of excavated dirt lay heaped about deepening shafts, like oversized crab-castings along a shore. The human crustaceans who dug here twenty or thirty years ago were gone, many returned to the earth whence they came, having taken what was of value and left their detritus here. Thus history ends where it begins. Or only in these parts?

    Rear view of Forster and Mow Fung riding in a trap across an abandoned goldfield, their backs dark with swarming flies as the dusty track threads through pockmarked earth.

    The two continued along in a silence punctuated by the discordant cry of a single bird.

    “Did he say ‘Ballarat’?” Mow Fung said with a delighted start.

    “Not too far from home, enjoying his day-trip like us, maybe.” Forster chuckled. Grey butcherbird, probably. He had read that places were sometimes named for the cries heard there. “They say that Ballarat means ‘resting place.’”

    “Those shafts are Chinese ones,” Mow Fung said. “Round holes with no corners for evil spirits to hide in. Also, round is better than square, because the sides won’t fall in so easy, and you don’t need much timber. A European does not have to worry about ghosts and spirits, does he? Too rational for them, so they cannot harm him,” he added with a small laugh.

    The camp’s heyday lay twenty years past, when gold gravel was struck midway between Stawell and Deep Lead, one of the richest alluvial fields in Victoria. Before long most of the gold was taken, leaving only enough to sustain a dwindling community of oriental fossickers. Of late, the diamond drill had kindled hopes of renewal, and the New Comet Company had even set up in Deep Lead; yet a recent regulation barred Chinese from employment on non-Chinese leases.

    “A rough, strongly built man – there are many such men working on the railway these days,” Mow Fung mused. “If he is not known in Stawell, then he must have come from elsewhere, perhaps to work on the new line.”

    “They are indeed a transient breed.”

    Shops and dwellings huddled together, walls and a variety of roofs clad in boards all askew, yet which somehow in their chaos attained a harmony all their own; frail but sound constructions lining a street not wider than a cart track.

    To Forster, this time too, everything seemed Chinese, from curious fabrics and wares in the windows to the cats and dogs yawning and scratching in patches of shade. Mow Fung exchanged a few words in his own tongue with a plump, amiable woman shaking a mat as Forster pulled up the rig. Her two infants played with a top in the dust at her feet and squealed in high, lilting tones, miniature editions of their mother. The newcomers stirred a hubbub in the nearby buildings, and within a minute a dozen Celestials had poured out and gathered around the trap to inspect the garments Forster had displayed on the seat, while he fended off the more enthusiastic who reached to handle them.

    “Nobody recognizes these things,” Mow Fung said.

    They proceeded down the street, Forster leading the horse and trap.

    “What a pong. For God’s sake, that’s a great patch of human dung beside that place!”

    “Dried out, it makes good fertiliser,” said Mow Fung. “We Chinese have had to learn that practice, because Chinatowns are usually built below the main town, at the bottom of a hill where sewage and rubbish wash down. Very smelly, though. The newspaper editor often worries that diphtheria will not kill us here, but will drift over to Stawell instead.”

    They stopped before the joss house, a low timber building with a sloping roof. A faint scent of incense drifted from within. Mow Fung went over to pay his respects, bowing and disappearing through the open door.

    “No good,” he said when he came back out, holding a paper lantern. “Somebody knocked off some ritual ornaments. Terrible omen.”

    “What’s that you’ve got?”

    Kongming. Sky lantern.”

    Forster made a noncommittal grunt. “Right. Say no more.”

    Mow Fung shrugged. “My mother used to say, ‘If you want to become full, admit the emptiness.’ Lao Tzu said the same. It means don’t think too much – listen once in a while.”

    “Steady on. It’s too hot for philosophy.”

    At the far end of the street, a group of men loitered smoking in front of a building.

    “Miss Lili Chan’s Jade Phoenix,” Forster said. “Its reputation precedes it, and not in a good way. Sly grog and opium. Fantan croupier of prodigious luck – or suspect dexterity.”

    “Good friend. Lady of fine quality,” Mow Fung said.

    Heavy curtains enclosed the parlour, parted here and there to admit thin slivers of light. As Forster looked about to gain his bearings, portions of the room surfaced briefly before retreating again into shadow. He had been expected; nothing illicit met the eye. A girl seated on the end of a couch plucked on an instrument resembling a pear-shaped lute, producing a languid, elusive strain. Beside her a man leaned with his head slumped insensibly against the shoulder of a young female, who smoked a long pipe and fanned herself with a bored look. Some men sat around a table playing pai-gow with black dominoes marked in red and white, wagering from little heaps of matchsticks.

    Lili Chan herself emerged from a curtained doorway in a loose-fitting, mercerised cotton changpao. The matte black fabric gave a restrained rustle as she crossed the room. For an instant Forster thought he saw a light-coloured shock of hair before the curtain slipped back into place. She took a cheroot from a lacquered box on the mantel shelf, inserted it into a cigarette holder and signalled to a brawny attendant to light it for her, before at last addressing the two men.

    Lily Chang in a loose black thick-cotton changpao stands in the Jade Phoenix parlour before a curtained window, half-lit in shadow.

    “Detective Forster,” she said. “I assumed our paths would cross again. I take it this is not a social visit.” With a smile, she nodded to Mow Fung.

    “Business has a way of intruding,” Forster said. “Even in agreeable surroundings.” He tapped the hessian at his side.

    “Intriguing. Even so, perhaps you will still allow me to extend some hospitality.”

    She gestured to a young woman, who brought a small tray with porcelain cups and set it on the low table. Lili Chan took a seat without hurry. After a brief hesitation, Forster and Mow Fung did the same.

    Tea was poured from a pot painted with blossoms and winding script. Forster sipped from courtesy; the brew proved lighter than he expected. The murmur of Chinese between Lili and Mow Fung faded into the notes of the lute. Her garment fell in precise folds from her shoulders; the high Mandarin collar framed her face and lent her bearing a formal gravity. A diagonal opening crossed her chest, secured with subtle braided knots. Though the room held the day’s heat, she inhabited a cooler plane altogether. She offered him neither word nor glance, yet he was aware of being measured.

    Then the voices were quiet and he heard only the sparse notes of the lute. She drew on the cheroot, inclined her face and, exhaling the smoke through her mouth and nostrils, looked at him fully for the first time.

    Forster opened the sack and laid the clothing on the table. “You have seen these before?”

    Her eyes moved once across the cloth. “No.”

    “You are quite certain. Perhaps someone else present?”

    “I do not recognize these things,” she repeated. “Nor do my employees, for I do not.”

    At the door, Forster offered her a smile and nod.

    “I understand there was some trouble in the camp last week,” he said. “You see much in this street, Miss Chan. If any part of it bears upon my inquiry, I would be obliged to hear of it.”

    “The temple was robbed by a vagrant from Stawell, a European. I explained to the priest, Mow Fung, that there was no need for the law. The stolen goods were recovered, and mercy shown. Too much to drink. He returned everything when he sobered up and regretted his deed.”

    Outside, Forster turned to his companion. “Priest?”

    Mow Fung looked bashful. “I only consecrate a few things here and there, make rain, tell fortunes, guide the dead, heal boils, such matters…”

    • • •

    Forster found John Campbell, publican of the Royal Hotel at Glenorchy, in his back office. He placed the sack on the table and took out the clothes, one by one. Campbell watched without moving, then gave a short, humourless snort.

    “I know these,” he said. “I’ve seen them worn.”

    Forster waited.

    “Two railway hands, December – navvies off the Dimboola works. Twelfth to the fourteenth, in the one room. Burns was one – smooth-tongued. His mate called himself Charley Forbes. Big red-bearded fellow. ‘Scotty,’ they called him, though he said he was Irish.”

    Campbell touched the coat, as if confirming a weight.

    “He wore this. Coat and hat – same sort. Burns did the talking. Held the money. Kept him close.”

    Forster wrote.

    “They came down by train?”

    “From Horsham, they said.”

    Campbell’s mouth tightened.

    “They ran out of money here. Lost it at cards and drank what was left. When it came time to pay for the room, Burns left a watch with my barman as security – said once the debt was met it was to go on to Stawell, care of Phelan, the storekeeper.”

    Forster noted the name.

    Campbell reflected for a second and added, “I saw Burns at the Stawell races a few days after Christmas. I asked after Forbes. Burns said he’d gone up to New South Wales with an old mate.”

    Forster gathered the clothes together.

    “That’ll do,” he said. “And if you’re pouring, I’ll take that whisky now.”

    • • •

    A few days later, Forster reached the railway camp outside Dimboola, closing in on his phantoms.

    “Painter and his son?” Forster said.

    “Ain’t here …” the foreman began.

    The discharge came with a dull whomp! – sudden and overwhelming, as loud as a cannon, yet muffled by the tons of dirt and rock. The vibration struck the stomach as quickly, if not quicker, than the eardrums. Forster jumped and got through the “Holy–” before tons of dislodged rock thundered down out of sight around the bend.

    “… Jesus!” He blanched and stepped quickly into the cover of the embankment, underneath which a line of navvies was gathered in loose formation, with some standing and others seated in the dust or on rails and stacked sleepers. A drizzle of stones pattered beyond the shelter of the embankment and a cloud of dust surged round the bend. A few seconds of silence followed, the men watching the detective regain his bearings.

    “Who’s opened his bloody tucker bag?” one of them drawled, earning a chortle or two. Forster looked over and was met by steely, sullen faces and a few grins bordering on sneers.

    “Should’ve mentioned that,” said the poker-faced foreman. “Bit of blasting this morning.”

    Evident the copper was put out. Didn’t much enjoy being the butt of a joke.

    “The detective is lookin’ for the Painters?” he called. “Where are they?”

    “Morning off,” came a reply. “Doubler yesterday.”

    A whistle-blast came from around the bend.

    “You men get back to work now,” the foreman said.

    He showed Forster to one of the tents at the workers’ campsite some hundred yards off. Two men dressed identically in grimy singlets and shorts, Richard and John Painter, father and son, sat on stools drinking tea, either side of an upended wooden fruit box that served as a table.

    At Forster’s direction, they examined the clothing, identical smokes drooping from the corners of nearly identical mouths. Coat in two pieces, almost the same colour as the grass in which it had been found. Waistcoat also in two halves, the buckle and strap suggesting it had been quite new before lying exposed for a month or more. The blue twilled shirt, comparatively new, a button torn out – that button found in the vicinity. Relics of the wideawake hat. All the garments except the wideawake more or less saturated with what looked like blood. He had not brought the trousers, which were found down a mine shaft some distance from the body; he reckoned they were probably the dead man’s too. Less distinctive, though; harder to identify positively.

     The Painters hummed and harred, seeming to communicate to each other in their own language of undecipherable mutters and growls, scratching their beards and shaking their heads deep in thought. The detective waited. Just as his nerves began to wear thin, the two men sucked in a breath as one, glanced at each other over their cups of tea, and shook their heads.

    “Yep,” said the elder.

    He opened his mouth to continue.

    Painter the elder sits in a canvas tent beside an upturned fruit-box table, tea and battered cups among cards and ash.

    “Teeth, Father. Company. Manners.”

    Painter the elder fumbled for his dentures on top of the fruit box between them, alongside some grimy playing cards, three battered tin cups – two half-filled with tea – an overflowing ashtray, and half a browning apple.

    “Reckon we know this bloke,” the father said. “Or knew him, you might say.”

    “The feller who owns these here clothes,” the son said. “Know him pretty bloody well. Knew him.”

    “Worked with him, God rest his soul,” the father said. “Nice chappie, broth of a boy. Bit slow. Addicted to the drink.”

    “Never once saw him drunk, Father.”

    “Never seen him drunk? You must be jokin’.”

    “Who said he’s dead?” Forster said.

    “Been reading the papers, that’s all. The body at Four Posts,” said the son. “Terrible thing, shocking. Must’ve been him.”

    “What was his name, then?” Forster said.

    “Scotty, they called him,” the son said. “But Charley Forbes was the proper name.”

    “Charley Forbes,” the father agreed. “Charley Forbes.” Tutted.

    “You’re certain these belonged to Charles Forbes?”

    “We know this coat by where it’s mended,” the father said. “This bit of stitching on the breast here.” He pointed a finger, the hand had a slight tremor in it now.

    “This here stitching on the breast,” the son said. “Charley burnt a hole in it with his pipe, so he stitched it up like this. Couldn’t be more certain it’s the very coat. I never saw him burn it, but I saw it stitched.”

    “Not a bad piece of stitching, really,” the father said, bending closer. “Quite sure as to the identity of this coat. No question.”

    “No question,” said the son. “Ain’t seen him since him and Burnsey took off together, a bit before Christmas.”

    “What’d he look like?”

    “Broad-shouldered, stout fellow. Large, flowing beard.”

    Sandy coloured.”

    “Well, light sandy coloured, I’d say. Beard was lighter than the hair on his head, which was a dark sandy colour.”

    “Yeah, I s’pose you’re right there, Father. Light sandy coloured beard. Dark sandy coloured hair on his head.”

    “Sandy complexion, wouldn’t you say, Son?”

    “That’s right, Father, very sandy.”

    “And this other character, his mate?”

    “Robert Burns,” said the son. “Like the Scottish poet.”

    “That Man to Man, the world o’er, Shall brothers be for a’ that,” quoth the father, and lapsed into vacant thought, his head nodding involuntarily.

    “Old Jake seen him over at Murtoa the other day, getting off the train,” the son said.

    “Burnsey?” Forster said. “Where’s this Jake?”

    “Shot through.”

    “Where to?”

    “Goodness bloody knows. Just cleared out the other night.”


    From the draft novel Stawell Bardo © Michael Guest 2026

  • The Minyip Letter

    The Minyip Letter

    “Must be about seven or half-past,” Burns thought as he walked up to Fergus’s European Hotel, the morning after he and Forbes had tramped off along the old Glenorchy track. Finding the front doors locked, he went around the side, in through the gate and past a pile of empty kegs, where a back door on the bar-side of the pub stood wide open. He was halted by the sudden appearance of his own ashen reflection in a large gilded oval mirror on the wall of the hallway.

    He forced a laugh. “Thought you were a bloody ghost, but only my own self. What next?” he said aloud to the reflection. He wiped his brow, which glistened with a heavy sweat. The morning was already warm.

    Eliza was giving the bar a wipe-down and laying out bar towels. She stopped at the sight of Burns with his axe, which he leaned against the bar as he drew up a stool. He swivelled away from her to the left, craning his neck as if to get a view out the window.

    “Give us a brandy, love, would you? I’m parched.”

    He took out his pipe and a plug of tobacco, which he cut with a pocket-knife.

    She watched his hands tremble as he inserted the weed and lit the pipe.

    “No brandy,” she said. Expression gormless.

    He looked up, and the pocket-knife, slipping from his fingers, clattered on the top of the bar.

    “For God’s sake.” Tone miserable in frustration. His head throbbed and his throat was dry. His heart thumped and fluttered alternately beneath his ribs, and the nausea set in. He took in some short, quick breaths to quell it, and bent forward, lowering his forehead into his hands. “Greed,” he moaned, “all greed. They’ve got it all but that’s nothing to them if they don’t ruin life for their neighbour as well. Rotten mongrels, and the coppers are even worse.”

    Eliza, who had seen much of what there is to see in life, was not discomfited by his demonstration, any more than she had been by his leering the day before. Truth to tell, she didn’t mind the flattery. Perhaps, she thought, he misunderstood her meaning.

    “Bit early, ain’t it? Delivery ain’t come in. Only got whisky.”

    She poured him a nobbler as he fumbled in his pocket for some coin.

    “Down the hatch.” He threw it back. “And another.” He sat and pondered for a while, smoking his pipe, staring out the window.

    She went back to racking glasses and straightening the towels. He held up his hands to examine them. The whisky had quieted the tremors.

    Burns cradles his head, at the hotel bar, an axe leaned up beside him.

    “Got a grindstone here?” he said.

    “What?” Warily, anticipating a lewd jest.

    “A grindstone for my axe. Got a grindstone on the place?”

    “Nothing of the sort,” she said.

    “Any grub or suchlike?”

    “What would you think, at this time?”

    “Well, give us a half bottle of whisky. You got that, don’t you? When I don’t have anything to eat, I have something to drink.”

    He slapped the money down on the bar and drew his hands up in a solemn, conjurer’s flourish, or one like a monarch’s, bestowing jewels and baubles of gold on the greedy.

    She watched him rise, pocket his bottle, shoulder his axe, and swagger out the back way.

    “Well, I’m off to cut wood, at any rate.”

    Next day, hair slicked down, on the way to the town hall he was afflicted with the shakes again. They told him downstairs to see Mr Franklin, who would know what he was talking about, so he groped his way up the staircase to the shire offices on the second floor, pausing halfway up to catch his breath, white-knuckled, supporting himself by the banister. Locating the door of John Henry Franklin, Esquire, Secretary, Stawell Shire Council, he knocked and was summoned in. He gathered himself, and again the call came.

    Burns stood swaying in the doorway for a full half-minute as light from the window behind Franklin washed him out to a silhouette. The room smelled of stale ink and hot dust; a blowfly buzzed against the windowpane.

    “My goodness, Burns, what is the matter with you?”

    Franklin sat there, amazed at the gaze that met his: maniacal, animalistic, uncomprehending. He recognised the man from a meeting six months back, over some piece of council business so trivial he could scarcely recall it.

    “Look at you, fellow, you’re tremulous. Have a seat before you fall down. What’s the matter with you? What are you doing here in a state like this? Confound me, you smell like a brewery. What brings you here, then?”

    Burns shook all over in a spasm before regaining the power of speech.

    “I have been on a drinking spree, sir, in my own time. Being once more sober, I have come here to …” momentarily forgetting why “… to look for work on the railway.”

    Franklin stared at the long, fresh graze that ran along Burns’s left cheek, which his beard did not conceal. The man was swaying in his chair.

    “You are serious.”

    “I am a simple railway man, sir.” Your bloody highness. “Except for honest fellows like I the locomotives would not run … I seek nothing more than honest toil. I vacated my position at Dimboola because … it’s too far to go … I tire of the scenery … Heard there is some maintenance available in the more local vicinity.”

    “I don’t think,” Franklin said, “there will be any chance of anything, at least until after the Christmas holidays.”

    Burns nodded slowly for an inordinate amount of time.

    “There is also the matter of the land I made inquiries about some months ago.”

    Franklin was prompted to recall the substance of their previous meeting.

    “There is no land available for selection,” he said firmly, and at that, Burns stood up, pulled himself together, and went away without another word.

    Three days after the Scarlet Robin and her flock had castigated him for creating such a commotion in the peaceful bush, Burns walked into a scrappy little farm at Pimpinio, eight miles the other side of Horsham, owned by a German named Baum. Passing the barn on his way to the house, he was assailed from behind:

    “The blokes you run into when you don’t have a gun.”

    He started and froze, his heart doing its new jig.

    “Mate, don’t get a shock.”

    Burns knew him as well as anything, just couldn’t place the face at first, here in this dump.

    “John, mate, from Avanel!”

    “Yeah, I know, Putney. Couldn’t place you out of the blue like that. Well I’ll be bushed. How are you, you scallywag?” Navvy who’d worked beside them on the rail.

    “Pretty good, mate. Just been doing a bit of graft for Baum, old tightwad he is. Say, what are you up to? Haven’t seen you and Charley since … must be more than a month ago on the line between Dimboola and Horsham, before I chucked it in.”

    “Ah, I’ve been up in the country selecting land. Thought I’d drop in on the way home and see if old Baum had anything for me to do.”

    “Well, I reckon you might be out of luck. Said he’s flat-out paying me. How’s the other bearded wonder, then, old Charley? Thought youse two were joined at the hip.”

    Think, think. Could kill two birds here.

    “Ah, haven’t seen him for a while, the bastard.” Think quick. “Wouldn’t believe the strife he’s put me through with the grog, so I left him out at Natimuk. Got on the spree, he did, as usual. Pawned his watch and I had to release it for him. Thanks to that I’m a broker. Look here, you wouldn’t happen to have a bit of tin on you, would you? I’ll be good for it next time I run into you, or I’ll bring it to you here or Avenel, whichever you wish.”

    “Barely got enough left to go for a drink tonight. Baum can’t pay me till next week. Well, I can spare you a couple of bob, I suppose.”

    “Thanks mate. Well, damn Baum anyway, I’m off home.”

    Late in the summer, he re-adapted to an itinerant lifestyle without his mate, travelling by rail here and there about the Wimmera, catching a few days’ work when he felt like it. Life’s not too bad with a few quid in the bank. “No sign of Charley,” he thought from time to time. “That’s all well and good. Passable life, that of the solitary rambler, well and good.”

    Burns enjoying a win at the country racetrack. He is observed by Archibald Fletcher.

    Three weeks after the Scarlet Robin, on a brilliant sunny day at Murtoa racetrack, he won a few bob on a skinny bush nag. Turned to leave the bookmaker and found himself face-to-face with Archibald Fletcher, the cow that Scotty, the idiot, had a run-in with at Glenorchy. Asked him what he won on, but Burns declined to reply, raising his lip as he brushed by him.

    “Where is your mate?” said Fletcher behind him.

    The same thing Fergus asked him the other day, when he’d run into him getting off the train at Stawell, peeved about all that money nonsense: “Here, I’d like a word with you. Where’s your mate?” “Oh, up there,” he’d said back to him, waving his arm, indicating vaguely – somewhere between Horsham, up the line, or that place upstairs, if such a one existed – as he escaped through the wicket.

    “None of your business.” This time to Fletcher, and kept going, just the same as the other day.

    He sat down in the refreshment tent with a beer and picked up a copy of the Ballarat Star, a few days old, lying on the wicker table.

    He let the beer sit while he read:

    Awful Discovery in the Wimmera Scrub.

    A labourer working near Deep Lead, close to five miles from Stawell, yesterday discovered a man’s body in the bush – naked and without a head. Police have given no word on identity.…

    The heart started its antics again. How fleeting, fortune’s favours.

    “What’s up, mate? See you done all right in the third there.” Michael Carrick, city bloke, now working with him on a place outside Murtoa, joined him with a beer. Thoughts and hideous images swamped Burns’s skull in such a torrent they confounded the brain and the tongue.

    “Nasty business that one, eh?” Carrick nodded at the paper.

    “They’ll never find the head,” Burns said.

    “What?”

    “They’ll never find the head. Or the man who did it.”

    “Daresay. When you think of it, I suppose that’s why the head’s not there. Means the culprit knew him. Yeah, of course. If they could identify the dead bloke, they’d go around looking at everyone who knew him. Still, with dogs and all …”

    That night, back at their campfire, Burns, carrying a gas lamp and a fountain pen and paper, interrupted Carrick playing “The Flooers o the Forest” on his battered harmonica to ask him a favour. Carrick being possessed of the finer, more legible hand, would he mind penning a letter for him? He wanted it written for a man named Charles Forbes, who was working at Minyip and did not want the man to whom the letter was going to know his handwriting. It was for a man named Fergus, who owned a hotel in Stawell.

    Good-natured Carrick saw no reason why not, and thought it was something he could do for his new mate. He shrugged and got a book out of his tent, on which to lay one of the sheets of paper.

    Burns dictated the following letter, and the next day had another man drop it at the post office when he was in town:

    Burns dictates the Minyip letter to Carrick at a campfire on the farm where they are employed as transients. Burns holds an oil lamp illuminating the letter. There is a harmonica on the ground by Carrick's knee.

    Minyip, Jan 20, 1882 

    Dear Fergus – I wish to let you know that I am here with a farmer at Minyip at six shillings a day harvesting. I will send you down £5 to redeem my watch which I pledged before I left Stawell. I owe Burns £4 8s 6d cash. I gave him the ticket of my watch as a guarantee for his money, so if you pay the balance of the money to Burns and let Burns redeem the watch, as I got three pounds on it. By you doing so you will much oblige.

    Do not answer this until I send you the £5. It is better for me to send for the watch than to drink it. I hope I will keep sober this time until I go to Stawell to you.

    Charles Forbes, Minyip

    Burns went down to the races again on the twenty-third of February, and asked a few of the bookmakers and drunks whether they’d run into Scotty, because he wanted the twenty quid he owed him. That night, he got drunk, created a disturbance at the Murtoa pub, and was arrested and taken to the lockup. When the watchkeeper arrived in the morning and heard the prisoner pacing and muttering inside the lockup cell, he paused at the door. With a jingle of keys, he unlocked it and pushed it open.

    “What am I here for? What have I done?” Burns moaned, gasping and in a lather, his shirt soaked with sweat.

    “Calm yourself, sonny boy, or else you won’t be goin’ nowhere for a while,” the watchkeeper growled threateningly, unimpressed at being assailed with such agitated queries.

    “Why am I here?” Burns in peril of hyperventilating. “What is the charge against me?”

    “You’ve been a naughty boy, that’s why. A very naughty boy.”

    Burns stopped breathing and chilled to the bone, a frozen lump of nausea lodged in the pit of his stomach.

     “Hauled in for being drunk and disorderly and causing a ruckus in this peaceable borough of Murtoa.”

    Hearing these words, Burns’s countenance changed immediately, and apparently in token of relief and joy, he whooped and danced a lurching, deranged hornpipe in front of his captor.


    From the draft novel Stawell Bardo © Michael Guest 2026